Hey D! This was the first piece I ever read from you, and at first read I understood absolutely nothing, except that I've never seen something formatted in this way before (and that Ian liked it-that's how I first found you!). I was honestly kind of scared to approach it because I don't want to 'read it the wrong way' but I've read it again, and I still couldn't understand too much, except that I like to look at it a lot from time to time. I know there's something bigger and I'm just not there yet, but I feel like that other poem too, Jouissance i think, I think part of that one takes place in a dream or something in the morning or in bed (it definitely felt like a trip or dream tho 🔥), and yeah, I know I just gotta keep looking at it again and stuff, but yeah. Really cool stuff D! I'm gonna be reading this over again soon!
I love that this poem can be read so many different ways, as blocks of flowing prose or in tandem as whispers upon the other.
Shakespeare reincarnated in 2k26 with a spiral twist.
Beautiful!!
holy FUCK this is beautiful. Immediately subscribed.
I love that you painted with words
Hey D! This was the first piece I ever read from you, and at first read I understood absolutely nothing, except that I've never seen something formatted in this way before (and that Ian liked it-that's how I first found you!). I was honestly kind of scared to approach it because I don't want to 'read it the wrong way' but I've read it again, and I still couldn't understand too much, except that I like to look at it a lot from time to time. I know there's something bigger and I'm just not there yet, but I feel like that other poem too, Jouissance i think, I think part of that one takes place in a dream or something in the morning or in bed (it definitely felt like a trip or dream tho 🔥), and yeah, I know I just gotta keep looking at it again and stuff, but yeah. Really cool stuff D! I'm gonna be reading this over again soon!
Something with a flavor other than “flamin’ hot” or “cool ranch”!
It reminds me of a Shakespearean prologue, but with two omniscients singing in countermelody.
Very cool; I’m now following your trail, and picking up what you drop:)